It's a new super thing were he has the power of dress and anime. he has a side power where he is like a spider but a human and he always yell out dress man to the wardrobe (spider bug is the ripoff version of dress spider bug)
Title: an unpleasant outfit.
One day Pete had a report there is going to be assination at the uk ballroom and i'm here to stop it (epic music from teleporting there)
David the Dave:howdy partner im here to show you around.
(a little later) ok that's it and enjoy your time here.
Pete:hmm “shoots David the Dave” mission complete now dress man to the wardrobe.
“Teleports" boss:PETE WHY DIDN'T YOU WEAR YOUR PINK DRESS YOU ARE THE DRESS DEVIL AREN'T YOU!!. Pete: Umm. The end… or Is it.?
Kia ora Daniel,
ReplyDeleteWell done for being creative and thinking of your own original superhero. Your writing would make a great play! I am intrigued to see how your story is going to develop and would love to see some more writing. What inspired you to create this particular character?
I look forward to reading more of your story.
Miss Tozer.
The image you've chosen goes very well with your title. Your plot so far will leave the reader/viewer hoping for more. Helpful hints: Whenever you write the title of a book or a play or a movie, then make each word in the title begin with a capital (uppercase) letter. Always write the abbreviation for 'I am' as I'm.
ReplyDeleteThank you i will keep that in mind for future work
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