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Friday, June 15, 2018

Planning your own poem

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     Now write your poem here
Red



Red hes dangerous with red clothes
Hes has black and white eyes like the moon shine
His breath is like hot chocolate at its hottest like fire
He moves fast like fire
He feels soft when he's relaxed but hard as a rock when mad
He carries a coat and a grappling hook
His voice is deep he always say hahahaha run before i catch you.

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3 comments:

  1. CalebJune 15, 2018 at 2:29 PM

    i like how you said he is dangerous with red clothes

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  2. Letitia AnnJune 27, 2018 at 10:49 AM

    your poem is very good but you are good at puting capetell letters and full stops.

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